Adrenalin writing ( Buffalo,lions and squirrel)

Buffalo,Lions and the squirrel: I watched three basic videos and had to choose one particular video clip, which was the Three lions, one buffalo and the squirrel. After all three I wrote down what I thought were the key information in the videos and then published them onto a computer. While publishing every fact I had to go through and add more detail, to the written story to make it want the reader to read more. What I found hard was putting more detail into the sentences. Having a proper plan or brain storm to give me more ideas about the writing, that I missed in the videos. Our learning goal is to add more descriptive words that make my writing make more sense and to create more detail to hook the reader in.

Writing inquiry ( Keke Palmer)

          Keke Palmer: I found and researched the main facts or the key information to complete the puzzle of my writing inquiry. I really enjoyed presenting my artist in many exciting ways, so it looked more outstanding on the wall. Next time I'd like to work on the different colours that would match the pictures on the background, or to make it more outstanding by adding every main fact onto the poster. What I really found hard was going through other tabs, to write my information from the website to the poster on google drawings. Our learning goal was to use all the main facts that you have read.

Writing inquiry (Shawn Mendes)

      

                        Shawn Mendes: I searched and found the key information that I needed

                   to give lots more detail that my writing inquiry needs, I really enjoyed getting to know  

               my artist by information. But next time I'd like to work on the frame of the poster, to make it

             to the size of the picture in the background and to add more colour and lightness to the 

           picture. What I found really hard was the different pictures of my artist's form of art, I could not make up my mind if this fits that, or if that matches this, but I got there in the end and             finally finished. Our learning goal is to find the key information and summarise in your own words.

                                                  

Profile

My name is Horowai. I am a year 7 student attending Matawai School. I have three older brothers, two younger brothers and two older sisters. I am maori, and I’m from Te Karaka.

I’m very good at art work including drawing and painting by using my own imagination. I enjoy reading different books that create images inside my mind. My challenges are to remember my times tables when it comes to testing and to complete my reading challenges for this year. My goals are getting my adrenalin writing finished before the deadline.

I’m looking forward to finally finishing my second artist. I think I’ve achieved a lot in my home learning, like getting three days done or the whole week finished through each and every week.