Buffalo,Lions and the squirrel: I watched three basic videos and had to choose one particular video clip, which was the Three lions, one buffalo and the squirrel. After all three I wrote down what I thought were the key information in the videos and then published them onto a computer. While publishing every fact I had to go through and add more detail, to the written story to make it want the reader to read more. What I found hard was putting more detail into the sentences. Having a proper plan or brain storm to give me more ideas about the writing, that I missed in the videos. Our learning goal is to add more descriptive words that make my writing make more sense and to create more detail to hook the reader in.
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